Show Me Your Teeth Lyrics

Is this poem any good?
I wrote this poem for my english class. It's probably junk but will the teachers like it?
No flowers will grow
Where my family and friends
blood does flows
You should not have to choose
Between peace and what’s right
Stopping the fight
In a war for peace
Pushing for coupes
Or supporting the troops
Anytime, anywhere
Just show your teeth
Then strike some fear of god
He wears camouflage
Cries at night
And drives a dodge
Look how crying now,
Look what’s wasted
Look who’s dying now
No flowers will grow
Where my family and friends
blood does flows
(Forgive the Jack Johnson lyrics.)
It's good. I don't see why your teachers wouldn't like it.
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